by BorrowedTime
Very strong material darling, very sexy and oh so well written, you understand the submissive and dominant perspective intensely. I cannot wait for the reappearance of Beth's son and his input so to speak, I hope the spycam feed was recorded although much of the exciting action occurs in the bedroom hopefully within range of some recording device, thank you very much for your effort, your many fans are appreciative and anxiously await your next chapter. Kisses
Nice follow-up but It was a little faster and harder than i expected. I thought he would prolong, and enjoy the forced submission a bit, Keep up the good work.
I appreciate the comments and for those of you who chose the story as a favorite. With regard to the comment expressing a wish that the story was illustrated, I actually do have some illustrations in progress. I think the story will have to be re-posted as an illustrated work, though, when they are finished.
I believe current fans will enjoy the developments in Chapter 04, which will be posted soon.
No one is this utterly spineless or that stupid that they wouldn't release this threat of telling the community is useless because it would hurt the son just as much as her.
If you actually have such thoughts, I hope the writing is cathartic.