All Comments on 'Beth's Predicament Ch. 03'

by BorrowedTime

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capri_cd2capri_cd2over 7 years ago
Oh dear

Very strong material darling, very sexy and oh so well written, you understand the submissive and dominant perspective intensely. I cannot wait for the reappearance of Beth's son and his input so to speak, I hope the spycam feed was recorded although much of the exciting action occurs in the bedroom hopefully within range of some recording device, thank you very much for your effort, your many fans are appreciative and anxiously await your next chapter. Kisses

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good followup

Nice follow-up but It was a little faster and harder than i expected. I thought he would prolong, and enjoy the forced submission a bit, Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hot fucking story.

Loved it and lived it. Wish it was illustrated.

BorrowedTimeBorrowedTimeover 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the interest and support. Chapter 04 will be posted soon.

I appreciate the comments and for those of you who chose the story as a favorite. With regard to the comment expressing a wish that the story was illustrated, I actually do have some illustrations in progress. I think the story will have to be re-posted as an illustrated work, though, when they are finished.

I believe current fans will enjoy the developments in Chapter 04, which will be posted soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
My suspension of disbelief cannot take this

No one is this utterly spineless or that stupid that they wouldn't release this threat of telling the community is useless because it would hurt the son just as much as her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Tiaa.. Teenage loggerhead - degenerate to the extras..

SheerlookSheerlookover 3 years ago
Sorry, too much for me.

If you actually have such thoughts, I hope the writing is cathartic.

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