All Comments on 'Betrayal Ch. 02'

by DeirdreThyme

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BillyBobJoeEdBillyBobJoeEdover 15 years ago
Waiting for more

It might be going a little slow for some, but I love the way the tension and teasing is building here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
She's begging

Nothing like a cockteaser to give you a wild ride . It's a long time coming but it's going to be worth it .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
betrayal

Stories are too short just when he's getting worked up you end the chapter

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