All Comments on 'Betrayal of Trust Ch. 03'

by RossDaniels

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Um...

What happened to chapters 3-8?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
was ok

was a good story but not as good as chapters 1 and 2, there wasnt enough of julie in the end part would have liked her to be more invloved

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Cliffhanger, or...

Wonderful story, steamy descriptions... but is there more? If this is the end, then it was poorly handled. If theres more... out with it! (Please?)

juci_lucijuci_lucialmost 13 years ago
fantastic ending!!

I absolutely loved the ending of this story! to read about her getting fucked from behind so roughly was sooo hot!!! brilliantly written as usual by you Ross! moving along to your other work now!!! luci xxx

ThatGirl13ThatGirl13over 12 years ago
loved it...

when she pulled out the big flashlight i was hooked... i've fallen for mine a time or two myself. VERY hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

First two chapters were good and on point, but introducing Brian ruined the lesbian story line. Bad idea to a very good start. Keeping the teacher under the students thumb would have been great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Disapointment

You ruined a good story when you brought the boy into it. Three stars only

Tims922Tims922about 4 years ago
Amazing and Intriguing

This is one of my all time favorites... wish you would continue this story! Love everything about the story...

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