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bruce22bruce22over 11 years ago
Wonderful Twist

I can not wait for the next chapter. People are always lying directly or indirectly because they think that it is better for everyone to not burn the house down....

rightbankrightbankabout 10 years ago
Huh?

Talk about the horse and the cart being mixed up, this is just a traffic jamb.

Or is the Kettle and the pot?

Let's see, Ruth and Andrew have moved in together. Celia is still Andrew's wife but he asks Ruth to marry him.

Andrew goes home when Celia calls only to find out that she has been having an ongoing affair for years with the good Pastor.

And the father has been lying about it to his wife and now the church.

SNAFU

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rightbankrightbankabout 10 years ago
ooops

sister, not wife, my bad.

chytownchytownabout 3 years ago
Very Entertaining Read*****

Great story telling something different. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wonderful story!

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