All Comments on 'Betrayed Pt. 01'

TWO PEOPLE AND WEAK WRITER.GROW UP

Hot story, great to see you writing again!

Very nice to see you writing again, can't wait for part 2

Loved it. Thank you for being one of the best fetish writers ever.

Loved it so far

hot hot hot

Hot story I can't wait for more chapters

As ever way too hot to trot... keep them coming!

My favorite author is back

More stories about hot slutty moms humiliating their sons please!

Haven't even finished it yet, and I'm already very happy. Thanks.

So hot I cannot wait for the next chapter

I love your tone of betrayal and paranoia. the hot females addicted to the huge cock and the beta male who is powerless to stop it, even his mother.

Look forward to part 2-- I hope the revenge fails lol.

Your best story! 5/5

MUST CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fucking disgusting betrayal. Good thing there is a ch. 2. We'll see...

Nothing like a mother fucking behind her son’s back.

Very erotic story - nice setup and follow through