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by SwitchingMichelle
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Anonymousabout 12 years agoNot bad
This is a pretty exciting story. Let me know when ne the next chapter is published.
Could you include a sexy picture with your bio?
mel_pomeneabout 12 years agoA nice story.
You did well with this opening chapter, SwingingMichelle - I look forward to reading Chapter 2. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
6FootChickabout 12 years agoOh So Good!
I really enjoyed your story. Can't wait for the next chapters.
dwjeanesabout 12 years agoGood start.
I recommend that you have some folks proofread your writing, as there are a few minor grammar and other errors. This in no way is meant to detract from the quality of the tale thus far. I look forward to more chapters of Michelle!
Best wishes
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