All Comments on 'Better Than a Telegram'

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21stcv21stcvover 9 years ago
EXcellent

But I do think humour and satire would be more appropriate

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Huge turn on. I came 3 times, with a little help from my trusty pebble vibe ;) More of the same, please :D

Will6969doWill6969doover 9 years ago
Five bigins

Great story! Wonderful concept! Where do I sign up for my Medicare part-C(um)? I will even turn in my Obama phone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wishes for me

I could wish for this type of program for myself in a few years. I would have reservations about its' implementation, however. Having such a emphasis on numbers, with a private contractor there would be huge temptation to cut costs. The first place to cut costs would be lab tests for STD's as that would be a huge expense. I wish it could be done safely, because when I'm 80 I'd like to think a 20something would come around once in a while and help me feel not quite so alone for a little while. This was not only very sexy but in a way a very compassionate story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Work

Great story. Nice concept and well-written. Further installments would be great.

roganwriterroganwriterabout 9 years ago
Great story

Looking forward to the next installment! Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wow!

I would love to work for a place like this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please do more!

Awesome story! I'd love to hear more about Lauren's adventures with S.L.U.R.P.! Looking forward to a (possible) follow up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great

More points of view required don't just focus on Lauren a new recruit would be good twist. Oh and how did Sarah start with SLURP.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Underrated

I don't understand why this story gets so little attention its excellent. When do we get the next installment?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
great story

I would love to work with old men like those too

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hot. Need more. Nice writing

Needs a sequel that shows how deep she gets into this business. Maybe gets too close to a client. Loved it. Came all over my fingers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
some more humor maybe

fun story but maybe have something in here about how her boyfriend slowly starts to notice that his girls once nice tight pussy is starting to get sloppy and wide to the point that he can't really feel her and she can't feel him. I mean the constant sex with so many partners (30 big cocks in one day !) and no rest in between would definitely have some affect. Not that this should be a cuck story or cheating wife (she is a GF not wife) but you get the point.

OldnotDead71OldnotDead71about 3 years ago
Lauren is a trooper!

Perhaps a little exaggerated, but this is a fantasy, so....

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