by Ikely
My wife and her husband came in, loudly chattering and laughing. <p>
Gwyneth came out of the bathroom and said, "How much did you win?" <p>
Hot story. It was fun to envision my hottest cousin while reading it, too.
Your story has a very good arc of action. It drew me in and made me feel that I was in the story. Your moment-to-moment descriptions were very realistic. I knew and could identify with the experiences. Good pacing.
Thank You
A great story! Every thing about was fantastic but especially your decription of the sex. I made me very horny!