All Comments on 'Betty and The Uninvited Guests Ch. 01'

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tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
neato

Kind hot but also like a 1950 B movie. Look forward to the next sex capade. Great detail

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Yes, very much reminds me of those classic horror movies from 19-something. This was actually quite an interesting read.

agamottoagamottoabout 9 years ago
A well written story,

I rather enjoyed it. I DO hope you plan to continue it, as I would love to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
brilliant

A very good story indeed so far, I hope there's more to come - after spiders and cockroaches hopefully something more like a slug could make a slimy mess of her

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I live in Washington state. Aspiring writer, mostly a hobby now. I like off beat humor, weird things, sci-fi, fantasy, horror. Mostly inspired by B-movies, Roger Corman, old school pin-up girls, and Greek and Renaissance sculpture and art.