All Comments on 'Between Lives'

excellent story

Perfict

Well done.

Just... wow.

5-stars & Favorite

I've been reading the stories of the life and death of D just about non-stop this weekend. I like how you're trying to show us the moral compass of a man that has sacrificed part of himself time and time again on the altar of violence. Yet he still tries to do the right thing. Or at least as right as he can within his enviroment. I'm also digging the whole metaphysical / astral vibe of this specific story. The idea that an ancient ancestor made a deal with a devil and D is sort of the culmination of eons worth of generations that were forced/guided into the ancestor's footsteps is interesting. Anyway, onwards to the next chapter :)