All Comments on 'Between the Lines Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love it

Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Worth the wait!

*****

kvegasgurlkvegasgurlover 8 years ago
Just beautiful

I love your writing. I can't wait for the next installment!

FreeFaller93FreeFaller93over 8 years ago
Beautiful

I have to agree with the others. Your writing is phenomenal. Makes ME feel raw and vulnerable just reading this. Like I'm actually looking into this intimate scene and I can hear you voicing their deepest thoughts while it all unfolds. Your stories stand out in such a way that no matter how long it takes for the next instalment, I'll know exactly where you left off by just remembering what I felt when I read the last chapter. Amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Beautifully written chapter!

On a side note I would love to read a shawn and tom story.

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