All Comments on 'Between the Pages'

don't need all the descriptive crap.

I enjoyed this story. It was a great way to unwind on a breezy afternoon. I could literally envision the store, Nissa and Leonardo. I felt as if I was standing in the room as the story unfolded. I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future

The descriptions are necessary to establish character and setting. Would work well in a novel. Loved the promise of this story, if only there was real conflict the way the classic structures are. Great work, expand more if not here perhaps in more serious endeavours.

Your stories are art. I would be disappointed if this were a film or a photograph. There are flaws in real people but none in the pictures your words paint in my mind.

Thanks very much for reading and offering your comments and critiques as I try new styles and stories. Good or bad, it's very encouraging to know people are reading. I hope I can continue to provide you with a good reading experience or, at the very least, a sexy diversion!

-TN1969

I LOVED this story... beautiful, incredibly descriptive, and totally hot. I'm a bibliophile myself, so the fact that it took place in a bookstore was a special kick for me. Great job. :)

A simple story with two main proponents but written so well that it is lifted from the merely sexual to the intensly erotic. Well done, keep them coming, definitely a 5