All Comments on 'Between the Push and Pull Ch. 04'

by hudsbart

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
You are a good writer!

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Absolutely love this series. The content is excellent and your writing skills are top-notch. Can't wait until the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wow, these two are combustible! *****

I don't really watch porn, but somehow what they did seemed too intimate for porn. It might be, though, that no matter what they do, these two have a strong connection that cannot be denied whenever they're together, whether they dance around each other in public or let go during sex.

And when are we going to find out more about Ryan's past (relationship)?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Love this story and your writing. I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter!

MuscleaddictMuscleaddictabout 7 years ago
Amazing

This is one of the most erotic pieces of porn I have read. I felt as if I were filming Erik and Ryan. Every detail of their sucking and fucking is so beautifully described that you get the impression you were watching the film. You actually see Ryan slowly impale and fuck himself on Erik's engorged cock. Up and down you follow the powerful riding. The climax is reached when Erik pounds Ryan with deep thrusts and strokes his cock - "one jerk and the second with a twist at the end and Ryan was shooting ropes of white cum all over himself." Thank you so much, hudsbart!

jacksjoojacksjooabout 7 years ago
Amazingly Hot !!!

Love this story and Ryan and Erik. Your timing and pacing is spot on. Just can hardly wait for more chapter! Please, please, please post more soon. Knowing they are already written makes me ever more impatient.

Reading stories as well written as yours is much more satisfying sexually than some of the actual sexual encounters I have had, and that is both confusing and amazing. It is great because I can pull up your story anytime I need a hot sexual rush!

Thank You

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Was worth the wait

This is worth all the disappointments of checking your profile for updates the last few weeks. Love that their more private relationship is progressing now

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

It was beautifully written.....Thanks for sharing your talent with us

judojonjudojonabout 7 years ago

dam so good hope to read more soon love it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Never Stop This Series

Your writing is so good!! Please keep writing about Erik and Ryan I love it so much omg

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Translation for the French sentence

The phrase meant: "What are we doing here?" which adds a lot to the scene ;)

Can't wait to read more. Thank you for sharing your talent and those guys with us!

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