All Comments on 'Beverly and Her Mother in Law'

EXCELLENT!

A story well prepared and beautifully written. A few grammatical errors which did not detract from the reading or the comprehension of the narrative.

The sex part was very hastily written and the burning passion in the description of the sexual act was missing somewhere. Hopefully, the next story will be great. Cheers.

Idiotic!

Stupid now I'll explain why no damn husband would stand by and let that happen he would kick her to the curb and no loving mother to her son would have gotten involved with this scheme that was cooked up so the wife could fuck around on her husband and be a cheating slut you need to learn what is a good story and what is fucking Stupid