by pervinplainpackage
Some stories should be left alone, this is not one of them. Some people should not write, you are one of them.
Don't be discouraged by one comment. The original was a pretty good story, but we don't know where you are going with your version yet.
Hope you write more, next about more exhibition with Bev. And the next time with Anthony.Take her back to the strip club where all this started to see how she acts.
Kinda pathetic, really. Guy can't get excited without being raunchy - and the stupid 'sharing' trash is just a cover for guys who are just gay down deep.