All Comments on 'Beverly and I'

There are a group of readers who hate stories like this, and they are going to slam you. A smaller number, and I am one of them, really like wife sharing stories. Good job! You got my 5.

well written - and tho not to everyones taste(previous comment) - an excellent type of its genre. I am sure it is every mans fantasy to experience this. Some just dont admit it. Fine. Dont read and dont leave negative comments then! But for me? Brilliant! thanks for a great read!

Ok, it was pretty good. Like someone else said tho, get ready to get slammed.

Attention all slammers: If you don't like it, don't read it. Have some class, for God's sake. If you think it's crap or you're grossed out, write something better and submit it. At least this author had the balls to write something that some people here might enjoy. If you can't write a story (and it appears that most of you can't even spell) then keep your damn mouth shut and your fingers off the keyboard.

great build up.

I loved your story, and how you took the reader down the path slowly and erotically. I too am a wife sharer, and it is a magnificent turn on! Your story had me harder than Chinese algebra. Keep the stories flowing, especially another chapter regarding Bev's date with Sam. Don't pay attention to the idiots who criticize this genre. If they don't like them, why are they here?

Very well written and highly erotic. I hope to hear what transpired between the wife and Sam in a follow-up story. The only real criticism I had was the title ... it should have been "Beverly and Me."

and a well written story. I love exhibitionism but maybe went over the "realism" line in the elevator. I keep wanting my wife to do the beaver shot thing when out.

I hope she has second thought about the actual deed with Sam. some things are better as just fantasy, but either way I'm sure it will be a good story.

Well done, truly what I look for in 'Loving Wives'. The gradual change that takes place, the shift in thinking in both partners that builds to the consumation, makes for a sensational read. Looking forward to the following details. Thanks for sharing the journal.

You know how to make a story hot - it's not just descriptions of sex acts, but the causes and effects of the sex on the people involved that involve the reader. And it helps that you're into MY letch...wifewatching!

Pieater

This story could have gone either way, continuing the exhibitionism or, as happened in the story, opening the marriage and it still would have been a good story.

I just wonder what Beverly is going to be thinking when her husband goes out with another woman though...it would only be fair, right?

For starters, this was very well written and erotic.

What UK anon has wrong is that not that many men have this fantasy. The fantasy we have is that this happens to us with somebody else's wife. I think that's the allure of these stories and why many drop in to read and enjoy them. Then the crossover happens in their minds and they see the woman as their wife and picture their reaction to that behavior from their own wife and suddenly it isn't hot, it's abhorrent.

This may not have hit that level, though she's essentially said she wants to go out and do it for herself and may not care what he thinks or what it does to him. She's clearly not doing it for him any more or they would have discussed what he's comfortable with. That apparentlly doesn't matter to her at this point. If that is what follows, that story will be mercilessly drubbed, even if the husband likes it. I think the reason for this is that most of us, the non-cuckold community, don't understand it and fear being on the abused end of this behavior. The line that separates tittilating behavior and the complete destruction of the relationship may be a very thin line.

Not referring to this story, the problem with the stories is that they display the behavior, but never give us a clue as to why someone would find enjoyment in being marginalized and humiliated. Our own experience informs us as to why we would be interested in another woman, but it doesn't help us understand why we would be content never to have our own woman again; never again to enjoy the intimacy of talking together afterwards or just lying together feeling each other breathe and sweat. Is intimacy completely unnecessary in those relationships? What is gained by completely removing it?

Even in this story, her date is a decision to decrease the quality time they spend together. If it expands, they'll be back where they were when he became discontent. Worse, he'll be staying home babysitting while she goes out for intimacy with others. With work and the kids and the house to manage, and the time they would have spent together given to others, when do they have an actual adult relationship?

The questions are not meant to be accusatory. They just reflect a lack of understanding of how it works, and a suspicion that it doesn't work equally well for both parties, based on my understanding of relationships. It's clearly outside of my box and I'm outside of most people's boxes so I think few people will be comfortable feeling this can work long term in the absence of an adequate explanation.

A good, well written, erotic story. Mind sex can be better than physical and this is definately mind sex, a mental foreplay. Can't wait to read your other two stories.

Keep up the good work.

It is really hard to believe how pathetically vile the wimps must feel to watch or pimp out the mother of her children just to see bigger wider longer cocks. It must be step towards comming out of the closet GAYly.

As a fantasy it is pretty subhumanly jaded but for real cmon thats sick farm stuff. One or both would care not a whit for each other or thier family life - the marriage must be foundering so who cares. Puzzling eh writer

this if I tried in a hundred years. I'm looking for more and still waiting for my wife to take me up on my challange to flash anyone on the highway.

This was a very hot erotic story. This kept me aroused and on the edge of my seat throughout the story. This is something I wish i could get my wife to do.

and I will probably read it again. Erotic writing doesn't come much better.

Very well written, you are a lucky man to have a lady like Bev. I know just where you are coming from. Looking forward to reading all of your work

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So Hot!

So stupid and perverted !

It is an excellent story and very close to reality. Some people with mental lmitation on the aspect, which the story is based on, feel uncomfortable and react, quite expectedly. Say, I have a mental block on gay sex, then I will not like a gay story, even if it was a classic. It goes likeways. But it is for sure, I will not react so vehemently. Probably the closet wannabe's somehow associate themselves with the characters of the story and feel offended for the act of the characters. In a way this is the triumph of the author. Well done elia_cdl

it is a well written story - certainly not everyone's cup of tea. Like the Gay Male commenter said, if fetish/cuckolding/humiliation is not your thing then you will not like this story. If you like creampies and being cuckolded this is the story for you.

This was another great story that captures the complicated fear/jealousy -- desire/excitement that comes from wanting -- not wanting to see your wife enjoying another man's cock. I'm looking forward to the next chapter when he licks Sam's cum out of Bev's stretched pussy. I'll be fantasizing about it being my wife's sweet satisfied pussy .

Bev took one look at the spineless, prideless turd you have become and left you forever in search of a man. Just terrible.

I think that about says it....

How did this vile drivel got its high rating ?? Simple, by cheating! This writer is one of those Indians, Pakistani, British and nigger writers whom sitting at the PC punching 5* on their pathetic mind excrement.

Solution? Just punch right back with 1* , as I do.

are always 'anonymous' cowards.

Just ordinary British degenerate faggot like they all are.

The ending killed me a little inside but overall a great story.

Lust and jealousy such a hot combination

Best cuckold story I've read out of thousands.M

A good cuckold story (At the end a confusing time line)

I damn near came a bunch of times reading this!

Very hot!

I'm hard as a rock.

Thank you.

Going to find more of your stories.

Oh yeah, this one got me! I was rooting for Bev to go for the gold! I was left hanging but I mental'ed my way to an answer that fit the ending. Thanks for the story, tis a good one .......

Loved it 5 stars for writer. Wow Big jump from kissing and being fondled by stranger while with Hubby to going out on a date with said Stranger. I guess she is already ready to cheat. Originally she said she wanted Hubby there. Now that is all forgotten? Obviously to get fucked on her date. What about hubby getting to watch and be there to protect her? I think she has been having naughty phone calls with this stranger. That is practically cheating as well. She is going over board too fast it looks like to me! Hubby has opened pandora's box now his wife is out of control.