All Comments on 'Beware Of Wolves In Sheep's Clothing'

I really liked the story line and your style

fantastic

So this is about someone going to Harvard but written by someone who would have problems in 9th grade English? Sorry, that really killed the story.

Concept was fair, characters were not developed, there is no story here. What the porno publishers (outside of this one which will take anything) call "a stroker" - and not a real good one at that. Start over and develop something besides your own hard on.