All Comments on 'Beware the Mistletoad Ch. 02'

Man - what a story - loved it.

Please continue with these folks.

I don't appreciate the cursing in this story, it makes it seem so unreal. Also it Is jumbled together. First he was with his mom who he called Dina then he was with his daughter Jen, this all being within paragraphs of each other. To rushed. I only made it through one page. There were to many character which made it hard to follow.

OMFG! I LOVED this story. I want more of it. Maybe further explore mom and daughters penchant for pain, some light S&M and bondage. This one will stay with me a long time.

Inane,inept and totally mindless drivel.

One of the worst !

faggots

Awesome! And left open for more fun and games.

5 Stars for each chapter does not do this story justice , i have been reading Lit for years now, and there are only a few stories that can equal this .

Thank you for the time you devote to your writing for us your readers .