All Comments on 'Beware the Roasburies! Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
opps

Diet Coke was unveiled in 1980's LOL

Great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I must have missed it

This was romance?

Dubby49Dubby49over 8 years ago
Surprised

At the low score. Perhaps readers don't understand that it's just part of a story.

TrtrolesTrtrolesover 8 years ago
Nice

I liked this chapter too.

Cant wait to read all of them,and I hope he goes with Zena :)

His ex fiance is cheater and who needs a wife when she cheats on you !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hard to get emotionally connected to a bunch of cheaters and or sluts

Well written but very few likable characters. He cheated, she cheated and betrayed him horribly. He slept around with women who were basically sluts.

dyonysosdyonysosabout 8 years ago
The story so far

I remember 1968-70 very well ,it was the time of the sexual revolution but in some parts of the story i feel like it was set in the 19th century aspecially the time with penny,must be a brittish thing because on the mainland of europe it worked very differently,to be honnest penny would have been dumped at a very early stage

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
All 5's across the board....

Tommy Duck's looked like a great place to spend the evening. Something like the Hogs Breath Saloon in Houston, TX. Try their jalapeno burger if you're ever in the neighborhood - good stuff. Great story, looking forward to the rest of it...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Totally agree with Anon comment in quotes below

Quote "Hard to get emotionally connected to a bunch of cheaters and or sluts

Well written but very few likable characters. He cheated, she cheated and betrayed him horribly. He slept around with women who were basically sluts."

Pity first part was good. He had the morality of a gutter rat, so how can you sympathise with Penny's betrayal of him. 3*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

For us ordinary folk...!!!!!! (Jr. partner upper crust law firm, posh car, two-bedroom flat, lots of time off, weekly bridge with 3 stunning girls...) "...it did not swing too much."!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Shagging three different beautiful women in the course of ten weeks.) Come, come, LW author, no need for false modesty here!

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I live the the North West of England, where we get more than our share of rain, hence my pen-name. Before I retired, more years ago than I care to think about, I had a job which exercised my mind to the full. I never had time to write anything but text books and manuals. Si...

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