All Comments on 'Beware What You Wish For Ch. 01'

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1Martiniman1Martinimanabout 11 years ago
A very nice start!

I enjoyed the opening chapter and I'm hoping for a wonderful story to follow about a loving journey between a husband and a wife. I'm just hoping it doesn't fly off into the cuckold abyss.

bullfinchbullfinchabout 11 years ago
An engaging start.

I am already hooked by this story. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Miscategorized

This probably should be under the BDSM category and not the Mind Control category. (Unless there's going to be hypnosis or something in a sequel chapter.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I like it

except for the all or nothing part.

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