All Comments on 'Beyond Death Do Us Part'

I really enjoyed this story. It was perfect for the category and very well written.

A wonderful little twist going on here. Over all the story was well written, evocative and moving. Personally I think it ended too soon e.g., more exploration between them would have been good before they were all over each other :) Good Luck and Well Done. (In other words, do NOT stop writing).

This story was just wonderful. Keep up the good work.

I really liked the story. I want to read more about them. It ended too soon.