All Comments on 'Beyond Our Control Ch. 01'

Lovely fantasy

...they practise lesbian sex with each other for years to cum... And the repressed motel attendant and Sophie's mum start fucking like only two women can, too.

is sophie a teenager or what?what does you job your dad mean?is she blowing him?

Sorry about that Redlion75, that was a typo I hadn't noticed. The line should actually read:

"It's a good job your Dad's away with his work....

That'll teach me to proof read my work a little more closely in future.

P.S. Sophie is twenty years old.

This was a great story from beginning to end. I can't wait to read more!!!!!

Could you tell us when the next chapter will be ready please?E5

Thank you for asking Anonymous. I'm a little busy at the moment, but I hope to submit chapter 2 in the next couple of weeks.

Could you please update us when the next chapter will ready.

I've been working on a few things recently, but hopefully chapter 2 should be ready in about a week or so.

Please please when will chapter 2 be ready?

Sorry, I have been really busy recently but I promise chapter 2 will be submitted in the next few days.

This was a very exciting story, thank you for sharing it.