All Comments on 'Beyond Redemption Ch. 03'

this story despite going really fast with little information is going pretty well so far.. maybe slow it down a little give us some more background information and add more lots more.. i'm looking forward to seeing where this is going.. keep it up please..

You leave me wanting more, and I'm sure you'll disclose more about Rays past as the story goes on. Gotta keep us coming back for more :)

I'd say her apartment was 'Beyond Redemption' but hey, I totally loved the part about Seth 'the mold-buster' lmao hilarious!! Interesting characters... I'm hooked

Still liking this, but there are some grammatical problems. The only one that interfered with my enjoyment of the story was the use of "revise" and "revising" for "review" and "reviewing". If you could "revise" the day, you'd be a time traveler, and obviously they were talking about studying, not time travel.

ah noooooo, the elevator scene was just getting so good too!! lol I'm totally gonna finish this when i wake up tomorrow, its awesome so far :D