All Comments on 'Beyond the Black Gate Ch. 02'

Damn fine work, And I'm not even normally a fan of futa.

Love the helplessness of the situation and utter crushung of her mind from pleasure. and that it wasn't jist end of story after mind break. Do hope she corrupts goldilocks there.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

This was a great read. Please keep going with the series!

Nice Read. Very enjoyable.

Perhaps a bit more character development earlier in story. More insight from Flaire maybe? (Idk.)

Heady combination exotic sensuality, sexuality, lust, d/s, corruption, supernatural, ethics.

Colorfully Graphic.

Mmmmm!

Thanks for posting.

Hope there's more.

I absolutely cannot believe that this is only your second work uploaded to Literotica. Your work is beyond captivating, and it feels like you've been writing for years. Excellent work!

This story is amazing - really looking forward to its continuation!

i love where this i going, maybe some light noncon/coercion with an angel?

Very very nice. Looking forward to seeing the angel corrupted. Loved the raw heat in this chapter.0

Excellent story! Hope you'll continue it someday.

This was startlingly good. It's a real shame it was abandoned so soon. It had real promise.

It's always sad to find abandoned jewels like this hidden in the stories on this site.

Noooo mph so hope this isn't abandoned really doing great