All Comments on 'Beyond the Wall'

by Drakon66

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hornybiman64hornybiman64over 7 years ago
wow

Wish I was at that party.

WhiskeyIsGoodWhiskeyIsGoodover 7 years ago
Loved it

That was so damn hot. I would LOVE to be at a party like that. I really hope there is a part two, I'll be keeping my eyes open for it.

AntoinetteBelleAntoinetteBelleover 7 years ago
Well done

Loved it , very hot, I too would just love the opportunity to be at the party dressed en femme

Xxxxxx

Antoinette.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Terrific!

Wow....loved the story. As a few others have said as well, I would happily attend a party like that!

donnieohdonnieohover 7 years ago
wow

Thank you. What a sensual story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fantastic!

Loved this story. The build-up to the night of the party was excellent, and the tenderness between DJ and Amanda made the story even hotter. Five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great

I honestly have to rate that as one of the best stories I've ever read. You are one hell of a writer. I see Whiskeyisgood liked it as well. In my opinion thats high praise since thats one of my favorite authors here. I certainly hope you are considering a Chapter 2. Thank you very much for sharing that story. I loved it.

Toni Tempts

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Holy moly:O:O

This story was amazing! So hot!! Like the others said, being at this party would be a dream for us all! Whiskey liked it too, who is one of the best!

Loved the way you described his first experience.. Please let there be a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sensual Storytelling

Great story! I love that you make the effort to describe the characters' feelings about what's going on. Good scene setting and build-up as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
will

will there be more to this story it was a great one

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great

Great story and writing. Can't wait for the next chapter

AntoinetteBelleAntoinetteBelleover 7 years ago
Sensational

Loved it and relate totally. Yes, I certainly suspect that most (all) of us readers would love to attend a party like that. I smiled with reference to little bo peep. That's is one of the earliest costumes that I mustered the courage to hire in my late teens for some secret dress up at home.

Would love to attend such a party as Antoinette and discover some attention from men (or maybe another CD). Adored your blow job description. I could almost feel him in my mouth.

Xxxxxx

Antoinette.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I love this story

This is the best story I have read on here in a long time .

I hope they fall in love and maybe get married they seem like they would do good together . Please let there be more to this story.

tex4tgtex4tgover 7 years ago
That was awsome .

Please Drakon continue this story .You write it I'll read it . :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Oh fuck!!!

There aren't enough stars to give this story!! Please continue!!!

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 7 years ago
Your at your best

You have done it again. You write a story and pull the reader right in like we are a fly on the wall. Well detailed, and hot hot hot. Loved each and every word.. There will be more dead batteries tonight...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I Almost Never Leave Feedback

And I have some stories that Ive read more than once here on Lit, but yours is the first one that I liked both the ero and story parts of with zero reservations. Well the stockings thing isnt my dead but it wasn't swelled on so I didnt mind. Still, 5 stars and hope to read a part 2!

gsxrslim81gsxrslim81over 7 years ago
Great

Great story. One of the best I have read on the site. Please add more chapters...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
A Squeal is a Must

Great job, good buildup and sex. Please continue this story.

GRYFANxGRYFANxover 7 years ago
Hot read!

This story DEFINITELY deserves a continuation!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Agree with the others...

...please, please, PLEASE, continue this.

TSreaderTSreaderabout 7 years ago
A very yummy story!

Very, very yummy indeed! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Awesome Story Great Job!

This is one of the best stories I've read here in a looking time. I anxiously await the release of the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Will there be a part 2

Would love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fantastic!!

Many thanks for sharing this wonderful story.

GingerTG81GingerTG81about 3 years ago

Swet sexy and well writen, A wonderful story!

Now if only I could get my hands on one of those party invitation :P

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