All Comments on 'Beyond the Were War Ch. 05'

now the Cartel woke up the sleeping giant with the kidnnaping of Renee... She's loved by all werewolves and the kidnnaping screems for blood .Hope Enrique can be saved .

I don't like this ominous turn of events. I am surprised that the women the went shopping were not better protected. Only 3 betas? And none of them inside with the ladies. And the ladies not shopping grouped together? I can only hope that the 3rd time Renee is in danger is not her final time. Hope there is another chapter coming soon!

Yo dude luv your stories. but seriously start putting them out faster man damn. since i started reading the first Behind the Lines Were War to this latest one i am just building with anticipation for the next story. I really hope Enrique makes a full recovery. Hurry up with writing them.

Each chapter I write is between 13 and 25 pages single spaced, and I average a page an hour if I can work without interruption. I have to fit this around work, family, and everything else, since this is a hobby. This is fun for me, a chance to do something I like and get better at it. I'm still new at this, I'm blown away by some of the authors on here that are far more accomplished than I.

I have to have the story idea and kick that around for a while too- that is why this sequel took so long to start, I didn't know where to take my first series and ended up writing a different story for a while. I appreciate the encouragement, and I'm working on the next one, I hope to have it out by the end of the year then it's on to the next story idea.

I really like your story, but since the previous one I am very aware that you are willing to sacrifice characters, so now as I read I am always waiting for another shoe to drop... Please surprise me and give a happy ending to all who deserve it! Please!

And war is not without casualties. No hints other than that you should have your answers by the end of the year.

Renee has had enough excitement to last her twins' lifetime. I am eagerly awaiting your next post.

I was not surprised Renee was kidnapped and those guys busted in on Enrique. I hope he doesn't die, that too would be predictable.

One more loss for the good guys and I will full on freak out!! And if Renee dies I will need some aroma therapy and a massage to deal with the stress. Kidding. Sort of.

I'm in luck reading this now as it's all posted but if I had to wait for the next chapter I think I'd go bonkers.

Simply great, the tension just gets ratcheted up and you're never sure what's going to happen next. Not good to have contacted Agent Miller as we read which was a little off as I thought Robert ad been told the office was compromised.

How did they finger Enrique?

5 stars.

Holy shit can anything more happen to her .

WHat idocy. The story assumes that all commo is compromised and declares that all werewolves are in some kind of war is a massive criminal conspiracy that has billions of dollars to spend so... we go on shopping trips and send small teams out to unsecured (and unsecurable) locations? Just silly.

You seem to have a recurring theme... Cartels for one. In several of your stories. Will we read about heads hanging on fences in this one?