All Comments on 'Bhabhi Ji Pt. 03'

Stunning Masterpiece

From the old one

Not up to your usual standard considering the long wait

Pray what is this?

"And between, in what clearly neither pocket a clear bulge."

Oh Respected Old One!

Put it down to being rusty! I appreciate your comments and this error in wording that you have pointed out merely underscores the fact that you are a discerning reader; who indeed reads every word. What about the story in the overall? Surely you have something to say about how the plot worked out, overall?

Sir Who,

Have been waiting and Waiting really long for this. Why do you tease us like this. Great plot. Scope for lot of good stories and action further including group action too.

Missed your stories. Hope to read more of you.

From the old one.

My pendatti who had been ill for quite some time (i was the sole caregiver as she would not accept any nurse) passed away about two months back, leaving me devastated.

Hence the delayed response. Apart from a substantial private library(including signed first editions of R K Narayan, Naipaul and O V Vijayan among others) I read mainly on health and economics policies. You have been the only and highly enjoyable diversion. Your stories are among the best and easy for me to imagine and appreciate. It is unfortunate that you hardly write these days. And I hardly come to literotica except to check on you. My best wishes to you

the old one

Dear Old One

My condolences on the loss of your life partner. Yes I have been writing less. IF the past is any indication there is every chance that i resume.

On the other hand there are changes in my own persona as I grow older.

Time will tell whether I write further. I am not even sure that enough readers who appreciate the turn of words in a describing a story. The world as moved on to video as a medium.

Anyway - keep writing through here so we meet up!

Best wishes

M