by LustyLee77
LustyLee I just wanted to thank you for all of the writing you have done on this site.... I have enjoyed all of your stories, this one too, you are egnuinely my favorite author on here.... Keep up the great work.
When Lusty write a story ~ it's usually a headlong lunge into some passionate sex. This story's no different. A Hot story as always.
Great story. The only nit-picking problem that I have is that you misuse the word blond. English has a few gender specific words and a "blond" is a male. A "blonde" is a female. Otherwise this is great story, cant wait for more!
this one is great.
I hope you write more chapters on this
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Ok, this story annoyed me. Yes, it was hot, but, all the dialogue was annoyingly long-winded and rediculously unrealistic. Nobody talks like that and for that long in that situation. With some better dialogue that would be so good.
This an extremely erotic story and I enjoyed it but I would have liked it more if you would have put more detail into what Gary felt when he started sucking Warren's cock and also what it felt like to get fucked in his ass. Like what the cock felt like when it went into his mouth and how Rosa's cock felt to him when he/she fucked him in his ass. More detail makes visualization more erotic. But thanks for the story.
Hot, hot, hot and more hot - stuff. Simply written but well composed. I like to write bisex family orgies myself. Ive got quite a few posted hete on Elit.
One point if criticism though. It seemed a bit incongrous to have most of the ladies not liking to serve pussies or cocks. Otherwise real good