All Comments on 'Bi-Sexual Seminar'

but your language is badly stilted; there's no flow to it. People don't talk that that, and it detracts from what could be a good story.

These are two straight married guys who understandably get horny, watch porn, may start jerking - but where does the "slave" part suddenly come in? Ruined it.

I agree, the slave part was a little cliche. Could use some editing, but i enjoyed it still.

great story i like the reluctant gay sex theme

That was a lot of screaming going on...

Would love for this to happen

too short, but erotic as hell, needs more chapters.

As previously noted in several comments, the story began well, but then got bogged in stereotypes. I hated the way the two men wound up treating each other disrespectfully.

I think you need to use another word aside from “screamed”…. Like wtf