All Comments on 'Bianca's First Time alone with Mark'

It looks like English is not your primary language so you really need an editor to check your stories before you post them.

A little hard to believe, but I liked it. Just need more story, more fucking, maybe adding mom!!!

your use of language is fine, an easy enjoyable read

Short.

Can't understand why anyone would bother reading beyond that!

I understand, not everyone is into incest, but if you aren't, why in the hell do you bother reading incest stories? The subject matter is clearly posted, so if it isn't your cup of tea, read something else, rather than negatively leaving comments.

For a second story, I think it was well written, and I hope the storyline continues

clitlicke4u, I fully agree with your comment. And I find it strange how they always hide behind "anonymous".

But hey, I write for the people who appreciate it and I know that those who leave negative comments regarding the incest/taboo subject are small minded people who shouldn't be on a site like this to begin with!