by cadeauxxx
This was an emotional rollercoaster ride all the way through from start to finish. I guess J Lo is out of the series now, I feel like this is only setting up something else despite so much happening.
This was a good story but damn the fight between steven and his son was amazing. I like that you made this difficult to pick sides but Jacob still deserved to have his ass beat for what he did.
Apart from all the wonderful hot sex in this chapter, you've set up a very dark story with lots of suspense and tension. Carlos is back, Vida is with him probably with all intentions to stir his hatred of Steven and create a conflict. I used to read these stories just for the celebs but Ive gotten to a point where I can't wait to see what happens next with the characters. They're all so decently written, your characters feel so much more real than other series that just center around sex.
Love the big booty bitches you have in your series(though I do question whether or not some of these bitches actually have big booties). Would love to see Kathy Ferreiro make an appearance. (If you don't know who Kathy Ferreiro is, just Google her. OMG)