All Comments on 'Big Boss Man'

More please. I hope for a longer story next time.

OK.....you've created a scene and a possible story plot, but, but, but.......move on to the next part of the story and the next and the next, etc. etc. etc.

Fifty shades of Daisy Grey? Let's hope you have more than one orgasm in you!

Right out of the starting gate (as they say in Louisville) you struck a cord. We need more hot female writers in this genre. You are a fine filly of an erotic writer and we look forward to your career.

Keep em cumming!

It was O.K. but could have been much longer. Unless BOSS MAN was bang bang thank you man.

posted is a big rush!

Enjoy the feeling, then get to working on your next one. And the one after that, etc.

It's a good start ... you go girl!

However something seems to be missing in the writing. Maybe a bit more description or dialogue is needed.