All Comments on 'Big Changes At Home Ch. 13'

bring the lady at the wife job as a slave.she wants to know what going on,let her have a good fucking and find out.she act submitive and ready for some play time.

Hopefully this story has a lot more in store for its characters. Would like to see many more chapters as this story is nowhere near finished..

keep writing..

I have so enjoyed this story. I hope that you will continue so that we can find out how their lives have changed. Excellent Job

That was Just one great story, I hope that keep these characters going. I ould like to Karen and he daughter as slave next, then all the women fall pregnant!!!!

wow best story i have ever read since i found sex story sites

Ya can't stop now, we're all hanging on the edge of our.. let Karen and Veronica strap Richard in the gyno chair, shave an O on him, feed him Viagra, keep him horny enough to blow his own son... whatever ya think is best!

i have never made a comment on a story but that was the best series of stories i have ever read

see owen is still a selfish bastard and not allowed richard to fuck his daughter. seems too be all one sided something bad needs to happen to owen to liven up the story

Well written story. I disagree about the wish for dad-daughter actions. That would be an odd and weird part in this story, and wouldn`t match up with the concept. Rosina and Richard definetly wouldn`t approve either. What about Rosina`s decision to drop the pill? Will she get pregnant and provide her Master with the ultimate gift of devotion?

let Karen and Veronica strap Richard in the gyno chair, shave an O on him, feed him Viagra, keep him horny enough to blow his own son

Hi, I have to say, that these series is one of the best on literotica! I liked them a lot! I hop we can read another story of this series!

Best regards from Germany!

story was good although not my cup of tea not really into slaves and all that wasnt bad until you put dad into it was good though keep writing you do good work

For me, it was a good story which could have been brilliant. I like your story until you added the father into the group which I thought ruined it. You could have added Karen and her daughter to his list of slaves to make it more interesting and also give his sister the baby that she dream of giving him but that when missing as well. For me you had the right story line and characters but you went the wrong direction with it. 4 stars......

I have a feeling things aren’t going to end well for Richard. I think the sons going to push him too far and he’s going to snap..I think the power has gone to Owens head and I think he needs to reassess the situation…

I enjoyed it a lot. I don't think that it got "too dark." Well thought out and written (although there are a lot of typos and grammatical errors). I hope you continue to entertain us.

"I don't care what Master says, you'll always be my daddy!" ...

A few Improvements

- you could have made them get pregnant

- Karen and her daughter to his list of slaves

- not added the dad

- made the sister ranked higher than the father but lower than the mother

- maybe in a different location like forest while camping or at the beach

But great Story over all a solid 8.5 out of 10

Excellent story, but not doing anything at all with Karen and her daughter is a major let down. You didn't need to fold them into the family, but having Owen take control of them should've been the way to go.