All Comments on 'Big City Temptations'

You write very well and your story is very erotic. I'll read the rest of your submissions soon. Well done!

she is what ?

before she was : She was shy and naïve, uncomfortable outside the confines of her little rural community

and now she is: divorced and a hooker in Chicago as her whole small town knows what happened ?

very erotic

I'd liketo hear more about what is hottest to a woman especially what it feels like to come from the various ways these girls were making love. You are sure full of great stories.

Very sexy story.

It is sooooo Sad. I can feel the depression settling in. I have read all of your incredibly HOT stories and now have to wait for more. I'm not sure I can last that long. Maybe if I take frequent glances at your profile pic I can make it through this trying time. <GRIN>

Mike from Louisiana