by TheKeith
This story does not belong in erotic coupling, this is plain and simple a horror story.
One star!
.....isn't that how many people reacted to Jonathan Swift's "A Modest Proposal", or "Southpark", or "Family Guy"? Classic satire. I have to admitt to a couple of good chuckles. I assume there is more. Although a humor tag might aid the humorless. It is satire, isn't it!? : )
Don't write any more please, what you have written is enough to deter any whore.
This was a sex-themed story. For those who still want wall-to-wall ultra-graphic sex on every page, I ask that you get a life. For those who are easily offended because I didn’t write exactly what you wanted to read, I’ll say the same thing. I also observe that the people expressing the worst, nasty, most virulent comments have—with few exceptions—either posted as anonymous or have never published a story under their screen names. Reading such comments is pointless.
TheKeith
Your tales including this one are certainly entertaining. Do I take them seriously? Of course not. But your take on the white guy-black woman relationship is quite refreshingly new. Your detractors must understand that your stories are not meant to be part of a bigger socio-political agenda that you are trying to sell. So my man be cool and keep contributing!
Hope her soon to be ex-husband is aware that she got what she deserved.
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (fuck the complainers) (You don't like it, go write a story.)
It's not the ending I would have liked!....You could have at least made the Hubby a Hero!....You Know Gunfight at the OK Corral type ending!?....★★★ WOOF!
Looked at it a second time, l was right the first time, what a shit story, absolute utter rubbish
.no score given, 0/5
The Keith is a Idiot sadist freak if He thought this was Good story telling Total BS !
Wow.... even the BTB Cabal hated it! Damn, if that's the case, I say 5/5!!!!!1111
The husband let her off super light, paying up everything and leaving her with plenty of funds. It appears that Karma said, "fuck that shit, this bitch is going to pay." And thus she paid a heavy price.