All Comments on 'Big Easy Lessons Ch. 01'

Aaaah, the promise of whats to come! God, it's so damn hot!

This story is off to a good start! You should have made it longer so we don't have to wait for part two.

This was my first submission so I have to apologize. In hindsight, I should have just combined the entire story into one entry. Each chapter would have been about a page and that would have made things flow better. It's a learning curve. Again, sorry for the way this is spread out and from what I can tell, each chapter will come out one-a-day even though I submitted all the chapters over the course of about thirty minutes. Live and learn. Also, I've caught a few grammatical issues, but nothing that would derail a story.