All Comments on 'Big League Dreams Ch. 03'

I hope you have a lot more in store for us!

Really enjoying this series - good story and interesting - thanks please keep it up

I know nothing about baseball but there's enough in this story to keep me entertained. Keep it up!

Starting to get interesting on the female front.

Come on Ray, figure it out that Allison has the hots for ya! - great story JayDavid, keep it up.

I’m a fair weather baseball fan. I enjoy a trip into the city to see a game. I’ve been to watch spring training a few times, and seen some minor league games, too. You’ve written an interesting and enjoyable story. Keep it up!

As always, thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

Oh wow.... he's in the 1/2 of 1 percent that start baseball and make it to the majors.... cute girlfriends all the way...... LOL...... It may be fiction but it's almost as real as it could be....

I have enjoyed these early chapters and hope the next one will be here soon.

Love the story. 5 stars. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Another excellent chapter.

Not a baseball fan at all, I'm a brit so it was never something we watched but really enjoying the story so far. Erin sounds like a great girl. It seems the endgame is the Pullman daughter but I wouldnt mind him making it with Erin. She seems great. Nice work!

Hot damn! It's just getting better! And my Allison guess which was looking like it was losing it's legs suddenly gaine wings. There were a couple of places that I though needed a bit of transition material and so were a bit abrupt, his call up to the Bigs, and his first appearance on the mound once there. It seemed to me that his call up needed at least a short scene of sharing the excitement with Erin, and his first call to the mound for his first appearance was likewise abrupt and so a bit jarring, if that's the right word, but I don't have any idea about what to insert for that transition might be. Maybe a short scene on the bullpen bench as the starter losing or ever finding his stuff and the surprise call to bring in the new guy. But still a 5 from my perspective. Still loving it.