All Comments on 'Big New World'

With a little work this could be a good tale for an alternate universe.

Did you bother to proof read this nonsense????

I think the problem with your story is you start it without any set up, and character building. But I like the fantasy that the world you created had a sexual class system designated by the pins. The SPH was well done. Overall, an interesting story

The part where he could only feel one side of her pussy at a time was really sexy