All Comments on 'Big Sky Love'

Good overall structure. Ending was a bit a bit abrupt and needs a bit more emotion for this category. Also it's a bit light on foreplay for romance. Good storyline though and the small town feel was conveyed very well.

Your stories have no emotion, this is the ROMANCE category, where are the feelings? Also they all end abruptly.

I agree the story lacks emotion and as far as romance goes emotions in the number one thing we need to see and be able to pick up on. Along with that it needs to be fleshed out a bit, I want to know what the characters are thinking and have better idea of their personality. On the plus side the story was very well written and easy follow just lack the vital elements of a romance.

When it comes to romance I prefer a long drawn out story filled with emotion and I didn't get that here. What I got here was a meeting, a couple dates, and then the conclusion. What was the courtship like? what problems did they encounter? did the exes pop up? did Daniel have a hard time adjusting to small town life? How did he propose? Those are some of the question that should be asked when writing a romance.

BB, keep up writing these stories! You have a gift to write short - but thorough- , gripping stories! I've enjoyed them all! Please keep more coming! Thanks!

Badly needs proofreading as you use the wrongly gender in a numerous of places. For instance "her balls". Also no emotional development, just lust. Good small town feel, though.

I was actually getting involved with these people, you're style. aside from a few bobbles, drew me in, but the story didn't have a natural pace.

please write more.

Very good start. Little short on the ending. keep writing it will come.

I adore fairy tale romance , but it needs to have more depth.

i very much enjoyed reading this story

would have liked it even more if it did not feel so rushed & compacted.

I love this story! My favorite part is when she says "Kiss me"

Montana people are big into yoga and yogurt. Bummer she married a preppy. Preppy's are too stupid to walk around unsupervised...

A bit too simple and Author you made a lot of silly little mistakes, but it was a good story. So thanks

Johnny

The story is a bit too fast for my liking, but it is what it is. However, it badly needs editing: too many missing words, spelling mistakes, grammatical errors, wrong names ...

A good start. I'd like to see this as a novel.