All Comments on 'Big Superstar Ch. 02'

I hope that there is more chapters still to come, where he finally gets to fuck his mom.

Thanks for the read

very good keep on the good work :)

Your first chapter was nice but this one is just great. I found the first a little rush but this one is just right. The sex is getting hotter little by little and I love it.

Who could argue with that?

This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read. I was constantly hard while reading this. SO many things to love here, the loving busty mom, the initial reluctance, the justifications she comes up with and finally the sweet mom-son relationship. I'm eagerly awaiting chapter 3, where hopefully, Dustin introduces the mom to the pleasures of sex by giving her a good screwing (the first of many of course!)

5 stars.

Yes, the story is hot. But it is also hilarious, too.

This is a lovely three way tease, building gradually with a great sense of humour.

Hopefully this story would continue on because it gets me rock hard visualizing the mom's curvy body in her very tight exercise clothing, tight dress, thong panties and string bikini.

Great story, looking forward to the next chapter. I love how she's so prim and proper, doesn't like dirty language, always coming up with flimsy rationalizations for her sins. I hope she stays that way. To me it'd be really hot if she continued avoiding dirty words and pretending her actions aren't sinful even as she gets the shit fucked out of her.

My one bit of constructive criticism is the way she called him 'my big superstar' all the time. I get it, it shows her admiration for her big studly son, but it was used so frequently it started sounding repetitive and fake. If you switched it up with other pet names too (sweetie, honey, sweetheart, stuff real mothers would say), her dialogue would sound more authentic. Not a big deal at all, just mentioning it since you asked for constructive criticism.

I love the pace of the story. It moves along at a perfect speed. Really looking forward to the next part.

Great story. As one reader commented, it touches all the bases of son and mother messing around. The mom, Charlotte, is fucking in love with her big beautiful kid Dustin. She's jerked him off, and she just cannot get the picture of his big fat cock out of her head. At first she can't even bring herself to say the word penis to herself, when she's thinking about what her boy's got swinging between his strong young legs. Then the transformation begins. "Dustin's large penis. She tried to get it out of her head by trying to think of other things, counting sheep, but no matter what she tried, Charlotte couldn't stop thinking about it." Is this the kind of mother lots and lots of boys dream of having, or what? A mom obsessed with what her boy's got jumping around in his pants. Charlotte's even crazy for what her Dustin keeps on producing in his hot young balls, his precious semen. Lucky for her the kid's got plenty of that glorious stuff to shoot all over the place, including on his own mother's tits and face. Let's hope that in the much-needed sequel to this excellent story they both discover the perfect place for the kid to shoot his sperm. How about up the same warm wet hairy hole he came out of?

Super fucking hot!! I love how the mother is progressing during the story from reluctantly jerking off her son to blowing him and swallowing his cum. Her vocabulary progression is awesome as well.

Positive changes in behavior and performance can be achieved by mom taking care of son's needs. Often a little show and a helping hand bring fantastic results.

I loved the way it reads like a children's story. One of the most clever things I have read in a while.

This last page of your story was so hot and arousing !! I think its time Dustin and his Mom continue not only with her giving blowjobs; game or no game but after masterbating and screaming she should let Dustin screw her hard with his big cock. I'll bet she would love it and not want to stop.

Thank you !!

I've read my share of hot mom/son stories here on Literotica, but this series is easily one of the top 2 or 3 of all time! Part 1 was great...but this one got me rock-hard quickly, and it took a lot of self-control not to spew my load right away.

I have a particular fondness for the theme here-the reluctant mom who has a long-supressed smoldering sexual being bubbling just below the skin, and a son who desperately wants her, yet will not force himself upon her...instead, using a variety of pleadings and smooth talk to achieve his goal.

I love how the author saved the hottest segment of this chapter for the very end-the mom finally giving in to her own overheated desires and masturbating herself to her first orgasm.

I cannot wait for the next part!

I thought the first story was sweet and competent, but sloppily written. This is more patient, better thought-out, and just an incredible read. Well done httime2! I look forward to the end of this story and seeing what your next series will be after that!

this needs a few more chapters easily so much to tell about this BIG SUPERSTAR

One of the best I've read. I hope and pray the next episode is almost finished. Because I can't fucking wait!

You've got a new fan!!!!!

Thanks. Sequel please.............

A very well written and edited story, don't believe I discovered a single error. Can't wait for next chapter where I assume the mother takes her son deep into her pussy and rationalizes that it is OK, then experiences the best organism ever. She then discovers that she needs his or someones cock in her every day. Good work!

......we're waiting. C'mon. Don't keep us hanging here.

Love it but need chapter 3 where she fucks her stud of a son. Maybe a chapter 4 where he takes her virgin ass???

Sexy. and funny, too. I actually love how the mother keeps calling the young stud her big superstar.

Although its a sin I want this story to continue any way the author sees fit. Though I would not mind if Charlotte decided to gang bang the entire squad before the championship game.

get his scholarship? part 3? thanks for writing

PLEASE write chapter 3. Goddamn it, this story is so fucking hot!

where is chapter 3,4, & 5?

Please do chapter 3,4,5 and so on. Let Dustin have the pussy!

Leave the bible out you sissy cunts.

Please continue the story. Love the conservative mom slowly converting into a cock-hungry incest slutmommie.

So fucking hot!! Five stars!

amazing!

Great story!!

I've read hundreds of mom/son stories on literotica and this one has got to be the best one yet! Absolutely captivating! Thanks