All Comments on 'Big Superstar Ch. 04'

Loved the series! The final chapter was awesome. I just wish that it was longer than two pages.

Horrible last chapter

The very sympatico characters needed a threat or challenge to their taboo love . What the author did in terms of football and carnal action was done well but didn't break much new ground. Maybe httime wanted to tie things up with these characters, before moving on to new ones. He has skills , no denying that.

Good series. Would have loved a little more dirty talk from Charlotte now that she has given in to Dustin, and for Dustin to give her some oral, and maybe even some anal.

If she is not on birth control, then how is it he didn't get her pregnant?

The truest comment for anyone in family relationship. My love for you is the purest and strongest feeling I have ever known. If you feel that way about me, then there is no way our love can be a sin."

It a good laid out story. Like it. Thks

Tho I have to admit this was my least-favorite chapter. Without the tension of the mother's guilt, it lost something. But you've got talent and I hope to see another series from you soon!

..... I can see you just got bored with series at the end & just posted a chapter so underwhelming. A real stinkfest.

And I had a lot of expectations. More guilt, extra tension & knocking up Charlotte, to name a few.

In any case, thanks. You're not a bad writer and hope it does better next time.

Really enjoyed it. Good characterization, hot sex, preposterously fun scenario. I liked the rhythm of the repeated device about Dustin not finding a girlfriend. Gave it almost a folktale kind of feel. Hope to see you write more!

I enjoyed the build up and how Dustin's mom eventually gives in to her desires. Really looking forward to what you write next.

lovely ending, thanks.

Brilliant Love ❤️Story! Brilliant!

Damon I read this after my cousin he said he hated it because the build up but I love the way you brought it up like no way would it be completely normal as the mom was conflicted but you had a very interesting way of building up to the final climax no pun intended. But your a Favorite Author and this is one of my Favorite Stories. Thank you.

But it was hotter than hell for me. It started hot and got hotter One of the best I have read here on lit. My congrats to the writer!

Good finish to the story and hope you write other stories

Great effort. 5 stars.

I wish you have more stories to tell. Thank you a lot for this one.

So hot. I only wish she had started lactating from them huge titties.

For a novice author, I believe great talent lies here. A very good story. well written & enough plot to keep the reader interested right through to the end. Well done !!

I loved this story from beginning to end. Fortunately, I discovered it when it was finished and I can rate it (5*) knowing how it ends. As a fan of taboo love stories, I loved that the lovers were truly in love and ended together with no third persons ruining the story. It is very well written and it has been a real pleasure reading it. I would have liked a more developed final chapter, but better an undeveloped happy end than a very long disappointing, and unsatisfactory one. On the top five of my favourite stories.