All Comments on 'Big Sur'

thanks for the comments on my 1st attempt at writing erotic, will have my 2nd story ready soon, so stay tuned

Jayc57

I really like this story, it had many nice parts.

If you continue your this series, you need to work on your punctuation, you are missing periods and commas, it would make it much more readable.

Otherwise, it is very good.

I enjoyed the story of their first meeting and wanted to know more about their holiday. A very erotic little read. I also hope to read more of your stories. Congratulations and well done on your first story.

I enjoyed your first story very much. I hope you continue to write more. Very hot. :P

I have no idea what these two people look like. The only description I recall is "Black pubic hair", and until that point my mind made Jessie a redhead.