All Comments on 'Big Tits on Lil Sis Ch. 02'

Great chapter! Nice pace, likeable characters. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great work, lost of good build up. I just wish the naughty parts were a bit longer.

I liked it more please.

oh my god more please

absolutely great, i can't wait for the next chapter...or 20

More, please. Lots, in fact

Can't wait for Sam to become more than a little sister and more like a slut. Pleas write more as its very hot

i read both parts. this is an amazing series. keep up the good work and I hope to be reading more chapters soon.

your style of writing was confusing to read I thought.

I can't wait to read the next part of the series...

love the characters and story so far, can't wait for more!

Five Stars!

I'm really digging this story! I hope you end up getting into double digits for it! When can we expect the next chapter?

Yes, a very good chapter again .... I think big brother should help his L'l sis out and eat her pussy to make her feel appreciated and sexy. They have many things to try out and hopefully do. Thanks.

The author has a talent for writing hot scenes, and isn't even to the heavy stuff yet. Excellent.

longer chapters equals higher votes. That is because the story doesn't end just as the reader is getting into the story.

I am hard..great

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"Nope," she said, lowering her sunglasses and finally looking at me. "Mom asked me to be out of the house for a few hours. You know. You're not the only one in the family who needs some private time."

"Okay," I said, "That's pretty gross. I wondered why Dad didn't wake me. I could have sworn he'd be up early to go fishing again. We didn't catch that much yesterday, and I know he wants to keep dinners on the ocean."

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Oh HELL no! I'd stroll right back in the cabin, throw open their bedroom door and be yelling "up and at 'em dad! Those fish arent going to catch themselves! Hey!! What are you doing there?! This is vacation time, everything as a family, right?! Do that stuff when you get home! Now throw some cold water on it and grab your fishing gear! ;)"

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"You stop with that fooling around boy," he called at me, "We got fish to catch."

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Catch your own fish, old man! You missed prime fishing time earlier when you were wasting it in there rolling around on the bed with mom! I'm just going to stay here and have FUN on VACATION with my sister! You think fishing is fun, go ahead, but dont drag me along so I can be miserable!! Hehehe

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Finding only her camisole, she spit what she had left in her mouth into its fabric.

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Um, why? She swallowed the rest, right?

Notice that brother hasn't offered any return favors for sis yet!

Decently hot. You think you can summarize Hemmingway in three words? And not a single one of those words was war or prose? You have quite the ego on you, oh amateur, unpaid writer of porn scenes. Also, I don't think you "get" Hemmingway. Try getting humble.

I had read this a few months ago, but I forgot until I got how good the story was. Are you going to add more chapters?

Better with just them, I hate when parents are added.

Great, sexy, hot

It is not difficult for one to guess when an author has a thesaurus handy as they compose a story. Suddenly a word will spring forth that is completely inconsistent with the author’s normal vocabulary, for instance the use of ennui instead bored. It occurs so often in this story that It is off putting and disrupts the flow. It is completely incongruous with his reading of Hemingway who kept his language concise and almost pedestrian.