All Comments on 'Big Tits on Lil Sis Ch. 03'

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ardoardoabout 8 years ago
nice

Great story, more please !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Keeps getting better

Skillfully plotted out

dutch513nelsdutch513nelsabout 8 years ago
Good work

You have a very good story going can't wait to see where you go with it . Good Job .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
MORE!

MORE! MORE! MORE!

videothingvideothingabout 8 years ago
Can't wait

I can not wait for another chapter. Please hurry with chapter 4, so me and all the others can have more of a chance to get off.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Yes, hurry - you are a very good writer and have everyone aroused, hopefully Mom wants to get Chris to screw her after Dad does to work Sunday morning. His Mom I am sure is awestruck by how big his cock is and wants some of that. Hopefully, she'll go after him and maybe Lil Sis will help too. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
2 pages is never enough!

Your work is so good, I just wish there was more to it! Lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
damn

That's a good story feels as if it were true

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Good but whens the actual sex going to happen? If not whats the olpoint?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
from admirer

I was waiting for sex between sam and then mother.I was bit disappointed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
No fucking? Threesome threshold?

A 3*. And I don't mean threesomes.

Beginning to get me worried, F_C. Won't want to invest in this if all it will do is just waste my fun time in the end, as many VERY promising writers have in the past & present on Literotica.

And by promising [ultimately disappointing] writers, yeah I mean you guys;

carl-aus (quit), httime2, Depravio, NewAgeErotica, Senor_Smut, doug_nought, VivianNyx, Hot_Sister, Mister_Shy, ScottWood, Palacechief (quit??), Alwayswantedto (quit), Ahabscribe, RgJohn (quit), Loaded Gun (quit), Doctor Hook, Dick_Spanker (not so much now but getting there), SEAREAL (big FAIL!), CorvusTurrim777, harding, Heather26, Ameaner, TheTalkMan, Turniphead (quit), leeleeliterature, blueboar (quit), Schaka (went nuts), GeorgeTasker (quit), frozenhero1 (quit??), Rob_mDear, George VI, exhootersgirl, klrxo, bluefox07, flawed_ethics and BarondeSade (QUIT!!).

'nuff said.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
While I would assume no rational person

could be wounded by the prior comment, I respond on the chance I am wrong. Authors spend hours putting together stories and then post them for free. If a writer who has produced material you like stops writing, the proper response is to say "thank you" and not to assert the writer has an obligation to post more material. The proper response to someone's whose early work you like more than his or her current work is to read the early stuff and say "thank you."

va45va45about 8 years ago
Good build up

Good slow build up and looking to the next chapter

wildman187wildman187about 8 years ago
sorry to read

how disappointed people are about your story. I found it very exciting and yes the build up of all that is happening is the best part of it. younger readers may want to rush into sex but the older we get, the more pleasure comes from the tease after all most sex only lasts a short time and yet the tease can last forever sometimes the build -up is so intense that sex can be a let down. build as long as you like and i will keep reading. do not let others rush your plot.

you are writing for your enjoyment and others will enjoy as well. the rushed stories lose the value. there are stories that from word one is about sticking the dick into pussy and bam after that there is little left. good build good tease and when or if sex happenes then allow it on your time. i have never given any stars to any story as of yet but this one deserves 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loving it

Better and better. Keep it going! Can't wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
@While I would assume no rational person

Hahahaha!!!

"Rational person" I'm not? Okay. Got me there then.

And "Thank you".

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
change my vote to 5 stars

I am so hard...Wishing I was on the lake

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
1 Also disappointed...

The title is "big tits on Lil Sis", not "Mom cheats on Dad with daughter with big tits"... Where is the tag warning of that? You have a mom and son tag not a mom daughter tag. Oh well

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Ruined story

Disappointed the mom was added. Typical teenage fantasy couldnt leave it to 1 woman had to bring in another.

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