All Comments on 'Bigger Fish'

The smart ass finally got what was coming to him. He's lucky the big dude wasn't bi. Thanks for the story....Rich

Trying to compensate for something? Well stupid people do stupid things and this of course is stupid beyond all hope. The husband has lost the wife and it's his own fault. But equally the wife could have said no, nut them you wouldn't have a cuck story would you?

The man's wife was cheating on him, divorce is the quickest and best action, get rid of the trash. She betrayed him, lied to him, and now has humiliated him, no question divorce. The guy may have a big cock but a two by four to the head or butt would cause all three pieces of shit to leave. Angela is a bit of a whore herself and pimps herself out to get girls for her man, just as his wife had previously done. ON second thought go in the bedroom get the pistol and kill all three of them then yourself, help clean up the gene pool!

Good story. My feedback's title hopefully will remind your previous raters that English is read starting at the top of the page scanning left to right. Obviously they missed key words such as exaggeration and fantasy. How about writing a dumb blonde, brunette or redhead wife story? Something along the lines of a voluptuous, naive bimbo wife/girlfriend that is sexually exploited. Remember Annie Fannie comic from Playboy magazine? Thanks for your contribution.

This is for the person below.

It's all about karma - what goes around, comes around. Good story.

Another example of "things aren't the way they appear!" I wish My wife could find a "Carl"....

her husband was too large; but some dude who is twice his size is welcome? WTF?!?! Put this bitch in non-erotic because this sucks ass.

This writer had to dig deep down the barrel for this one. There wasn't anything erotic about this. In other words pure crap.

And it illustrated the way some men are. He used Sharon for his own pleasure while he thought he was like Mohammad Ali or something. Then he gets his wofe to get ASngela for him...A good fisherman knows when he's got too much on the line and lets go. This arragont bastard didn't know what hit him...but Sharon did...loved this almost as much as a cheating bitch getting it...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

Your stories stand apart form others. I can see some readers don't like your style but I love it. Can't wait to see more on Mark's Family.

Don't like your subject, but I love your style!

Here he becomes the fetish cock watching helpless hopeless wimp he portrays which is a true waste of some talent.<P>

Puzzling

out of the comments then the story. Couldn't really see anything erotic in the story, except the stud got put down a peg or two, by a cheating wife.

Not a bad kind of humor. Not bad at all. There's always someone tougher, someone better, someone smarter, someone bigger . . . .

I liked it! Nice style.

I know you said its a one off, but I need to know what happened next.

What a terribly sad, pathetic and depressing story.

I loved the story. I have always wanted bigger and the story played out so well. It was very exciting and I hope to read more like this.

One of the worst. I am sure that previous anon comment was done by the "author" himself !!!!!!!!!!

Hubby should have taken a piss on the asshole. Nothing says I thnk you're a piece of crap than piss. I wish I could leave some yellow suds on this pile.

10 inch penis, and the other guy is described as much bigger...

Do many authors here know much about anatomy? Sure there are penis's bigger than 10 inches, but 13.5" is the world record and most men don't come close.

I know it says exaggeration, but damn. A little realism might have made this slightly better. The lack of eroticism made it bad.

Exactly as promised in your introduction. Keep up the good work.

My cuckold clock is huge. I'd love to see her with someone bigger!

I guess it is OK to be proud of something you did nothing to earn, and to feel superior to others who can't help what they have inherited. Both guys in this tale are assholes, but the bald accountant MAY be playing his hand more strongly than usual because his host has acted so assholy and is begging for the slap-down!

3*

Please continue this story and his humiliation

The loser bitch can move in with the idiot, if divorce won't work just sell everything off and roll out on her.

Two good stories in one day where the revenge was on the dickhead guy!

A read.

Maybe the bitch Will get an STD

get rid of the whore

Comments pretty good. Anonymous liars working hard. Story not hitting on much.

She’s just a whore and size queen. Move on and find someone who’s cunt won’t look and feel like a cave.

This story was absolutely great and not what I had expected.

Most of the bull stories are about how the guy gave pleasure to other woman

Reading about a bull that got the treatment was exciting...

every big dicked AH would get humiliated, there would be more justice in the world.

Cut the fucking bitch lose. Tell her to eat shit and die, the piss on her grave

I'm totally ok with swapping.. husband sharing.. wife sharing .. as long as everyone approved and there is communication and all stay together...etc etc.... but NOT with LYING and behind the back CHEATING... this Angela no good worthless slut bitch whore has been fucking behind her husbands back.. and I hate lying cheating bitches.. why can't she just have been honest.. and then tops it off with degrading and making fun of her husband.. get rid if her ASAP.. she can't be trusted..ever

She goes from swinger to cheater to cuckold humiliation. Time to cut her loose. There are always bigger fish in the sea. And there are plenty of fish in the sea. He should go find one.

In a few minutes Carl will put hubby on all fours and give him the good fucking a sissy wimp bitch needs! His wife will never fuck him again but will kick his girlie ass to the curb!