All Comments on 'Bigrig Ch. 15'

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! You are a born storyteller Billy. Edge of my seat suspense, passion, laughter....this had it all. I am consumed with need to find out what happens next. But you know that already! LOL Yummy!!!!

And it is. It's hard to say what I liked most in this chapter. All of it was so well written and portrayed to us. I loved the cut scenes and how Bruce did his thing at the wheel. Tony with Jonathan was a very erotic piece. But the chase scene had me reading with my mouth open, or biting my fingernails. Very gripping. And I was relieved that Peter made it. Oh, and the punch Bruce gave Maurice, gave me much satisfaction. Thanks for that, Billy.

It's very well done that you don't ignore some of the dramatic potential in everyday activities.

I also like how you handled the car chase scene, relaying how difficult it actually is to shoot from one moving vehicle at another moving vehicle and actually hit anything worth hitting.

Aside from some minor issues with word choice a quality work.

Nice action. I'm terrified that everyone isn't safe and well. I hope both Johnathan and Peter are well. Boy, oh boy...Is Maurice going to be pissed off when he wakes up! ~lol~ I'm going to take a quick shower and then be right back for more, luv. I can't wait to read the rest of this!