All Comments on 'Biker Chick'

Despite the little errors and grammar mistakes, its a good story. I enjoyed reading it, and will be reading more from you! Thank you much. And to my fellow readers, don't be so very harsh. It is an amature site. Its not like you pay for these story's, or the authors get paid for their time. And unless your going to write a story of your own to picked over with a fine tooth comb, give them some leeway.

MasterTiger

Good story. Keep on writing, it'll get better. Thanks.

Love it. Right up the alley of my naughty thoughts as well.

I really enjoyed this one. Again, I'd love to see more of these characters. Part 2 maybe? Biker Rally gang bang at some point in their future?

Wow, loved the petite little girl's naughty world. I would like to see her involve the rest of the family too. I would follow this up with more from Staci. It sounds like the uncle gets to play too so looking forward to that! After reading your prologue i went in carefully, but truthfully I did not see big glaring errors that detracted from enjoying the story.

Another great story, Tiki. I loved the dressing room fun and of course the rest as well.

Way to go, great story, it flowed like a fast river of rapids!

But you have to know that size does matter and this story just begs for part 2 and 3, there is the rest of the night and yes as another said there could be a biker rally! We all know about short and sweet and this so was, but leaves so much unsaid, maybe all these years later you MIT revisit it?

Great story, I agree, needs another installment. Lower michigan here :)

A deliscously erotic and naughty storyline that also flows well with engaging characters that makes the tale quite believable! The extremely detailed chronicle sparks the yummy sex scenes in multiple genre's.

Its only flaw is not being a sequel in my humble and biased opinion!

And shit house is the crude name for an outhouse. I've heard the term brick shit house all my life, 60+, and have NEVER understood why a stacked, sexy woman would evoke comparisons to a brick outhouse.

Outhouses were typical flimsily built, solid, yes, but gaps between boards, seldom painted, and overall just a shack. A brick outhouse would be solid, nearly impossible to move when it came time, and ALL outhouses have to be moved, eventually. I don't think I need to explain why. The closest I have ever come to explaining the why, is you could say a brick outhouse would be well built.

But, to say a woman considered to be built like a brick shit house as merely 'well built', would be like saying Dolly Parton sings and 'has curves'.

GeoD

I did miss that that one. I meant brick not big. I've read this one a coupe times trying to decide if I was going to do a sequel or not and I've never noticed that error. I do proof read but when you read your own stuff, you tend to know what you meant and skip over words here and there. .Thanks for pointing that out, If i use the phrase ever again, I'll be more careful

Loved her perspective, would live to be her