All Comments on 'Biker Threesome'

by shmily

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Spenser41Spenser41over 19 years ago
WOW

I used to live in Austin and it was a wild town. Thanks for a very hot story.

Thomas22JohnThomas22Johnover 19 years ago
Bikers HOT delight

Short, sweet and to the point...

Look forward to more from you "pen"

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I like it

I love this story. What is really hot about biker is that they are so fucking nasty and dirty. Usually there is no place to wash a cheeze laden cock and a nasty cum filled snatch. The guys just keep filling them up and about the only thing the woman has to clean herself up with is a shaken up bottle of beer to douche with. After a couple of weeks on the road, the participants get pretty ripe. Definitely don't want to smell armpits or give rimjobs and cunt and ass lickings.

I love nasty fucking stories like this where cleanliness is not adhered to. Usually if somebody removes their Levi's, they'll stand on their own with grease, piss, shit, and cum.

All right

Heidi LoveHeidi Loveover 19 years ago
Biker Slut

I love this story. I ride my own bike and I get turned on just thinking of the possibilities.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

Exhibitionism, group sex, what more could I ask for. Great story. I would love to experience something like that some time. Nice work....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Good job on your first story!

Keep up the creative work. Look forward to your next story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hot story

Loved the double penetrationa AND you must give amazing head!

bowtie4ubowtie4uover 10 years ago
3 Summmms Yummm

That was fucking hot.....such a naughty girl. Wonder if it was fact or fiction...either way a good read

texasacetexasaceover 10 years ago
No question... you're good....

Keep writing, Baby... and I for one, will be cumming back for more.. and more... and MORE!! Ace

mngrampsmngrampsabout 10 years ago
Nicely done!

So very naughty and oh so sexy hot! I'm looking forward to reading more of your writings!

blksoldierblksoldierabout 10 years ago
damm wonderful sexy more please.

very very sexy

tmmmbrrrtmmmbrrralmost 10 years ago
nice bit of writing

Nice treatment of MFM theme. The story got right with it - as it should be. It would have been exciting to have been any one of the three characters at the climax. ...and who hasn't gone for a ride with every intention of getting their rocks off???

thebeeskneesthebeeskneesover 9 years ago
Great story I love the biker approach

I like the theme of the biker girl getting laid by two guys I love the fact that she comes on to him and asks for it by both guys...sort of like a fairy tale romance Ha Ha Ha

HellBenttooHellBenttooover 9 years ago

I very much enjoyed this story. I look forward to reading others.

HB

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
🔥

Very hot, can a NC guy exiled to nowhere KS get a chance at action like that?

fletchxfletchxover 8 years ago
Just right

Just the right mix of being playful and dirty. Wonderfully hot stuff.

Paul_ChancePaul_Chanceover 7 years ago
Very Hot

That is a very hot little story. I enjoyed it.

cubbies4vrscubbies4vrsover 6 years ago
Very good story

I enjoyed it very much. Shmily keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
awesome dirty

would never do this...but not bad for a fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
fantastic

A fantastic story... very well written with sexy details... very intrigued

ndeavourndeavourabout 6 years ago
Hot and Dirty - loved it!

A woman who wants sex is hot; one who doesn't mind showing off her skills adds to the fire, and one who loves all her holes filled is on fire! Now I have to read more of your work!

TANSTAAFL58TANSTAAFL58about 5 years ago

You captured a feeling here: fast and raw. Nice first story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Why 4 stars

I only gave this story 4 stars because it didn't go on long enough. It could have started with separate chapters for each of Bones and Shadow then climaxed with the threesome. That 3 chapter version, written as well as this 1 chapter version would have deserved all 5 stars!

rjr_1954rjr_1954over 1 year ago

Truly a gifted writer. I look forward more to more writing from this author. 5 stars!

rjr_1954rjr_1954over 1 year ago

You definitely need a sequel to this story

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