All Comments on 'Bikini Babe'

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WTF did I just read?

Dahlia....

Wahai kau bunga idaman, bunga kesayangan...

The writing was quite good, but the story made very little sense.

I opted not to vote rather than hurt your overall rating.

But behavior indicates this may have been a better fit for mind control

Good God man, this was was bullshit...

Whatever impulse caused you to post this drivel should have been ignored.

And, for F..K's sake, who was the otherwise unidentified third woman?

Lost interest as soon as I got past the 1st paragraph.

very confusing and lack the sexuality I have seen in other stories.

go back and redo this story

I don't know what people didn't get about this story. It was really cool. It played itself a bit mysterious, and it wasn't bad. Sometimes things like this can come off as pretentious, but I think this was well done.

Good story. :)

Seriously....why would you post this?

It was flat, boring, not put together well at all. This is Literotica. It is supposed to have exciting sex involved. Again, rubbish.

These comments are something else. The story was quite easy to understand. Sure maybe the begining could have used a bit of clarification instead of just popping the visitor in like that but beyond that its just a short spank story with a bit of mystery.

I don't get it.

Well, this is certainly my most controversial of stories, for better or for worse. I stand by it though.

Just a note of clarification, though: I submitted this under the Mind Control category. The Literotica editorial team published it under Incest/Taboo, which fit just as well I suppose, though it might have confused some readers. I'm glad at least some of you liked it, however :)

Can't imagine there's anything healthy for a woman going complety braless all the time.