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All Comments on 'Billiard Surprise'

by sexktn

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I-WISHI-WISHover 16 years ago
Good First Time

Nice first try. A little to short and no character development. Keep submitting and improving.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
It's good, could have been better.

Needs a little more description. Keep going, you're doing great.

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